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  1. Kia ora. My name is Taylor and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
    I like how you set your background and the theme. I loved how you made your own alliteration and how you only based it on alliteration. Would you use alliteration in a story?

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  2. Kia ora. My name is Cindy and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
    I really liked the monkey that you put on.This reminds me of baby monkey.Next time you could put more monkey on it.Ka rawe! Cindy

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  3. Kia ora. My name is kylah and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I like how you put so much detail in your learning from kylah

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  4. Kia ora.My name is Chozhan and I attend at Te Hapara School in Gisborne. I like the way you put a animal in it I like your alliteration I wonder how you came up with it.

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