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Kia ora. My name is Indy and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. Last year I went horse riding by myself. It's fun but it is a bit scary!I like the name Hamana. It's a cool name! How did your cousin and your uncle tame thor?
Kia ora. My name is Zara and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really liked your gradient background that you added.This reminds me of in the first week of the holidays i went on a hack/trail ride at my nanas friends house.Next time you could add some more detail to the recount/add more words .Good work! Zara.🐴😊
Kia ora. My name is Kyra and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked you added detail. This reminds me of my friend's horse. Next time you could put some words onto it. Awesome work! Kyra🐴🐴
Kia ora. My name is chazei and I attend the hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. `i love the way you told us.next time you could tell us more.ka rawe!chazei.
Kia ora. My name is Kejon and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked How you added detail When I went riding on a horse on my sister's birthday. This reminds me of when I went on a horse on my sister's birthday. Next time could you let me see all of your poem?Ka pai ! Kejon.`
Hi Amber, My name is Iraia and I go to Te Hapara School. I really like the way you told me what the horses names were. Next time you could make the page a bit smaller so I can read it better. Great Job.
Hi my name is kylah and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. i like the way you us about horse riding love the detail see you at kapa haka
hi my name is Tevita and i attend te hapara school I really liked how you wrote your story and I like how you done your background next time you should add some more colours good job
Kia ora. My name is Cindy and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I really liked the colour that you do for your background.This reminds me of the sea .Next time you could add more detail.Ka rawe! Cindy
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Kia ora. My name is Indy and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. Last year I went horse riding by myself. It's fun but it is a bit scary!I like the name Hamana. It's a cool name! How did your cousin and your uncle tame thor?
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Zara and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.I really liked your gradient background that you added.This reminds me of in the first week of the holidays i went on a hack/trail ride at my nanas friends house.Next time you could add some more detail to the recount/add more words .Good work! Zara.🐴😊
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Kyra and I attend Te Hapara School in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI really liked you added detail. This reminds me of my friend's horse. Next time you could put some words onto it. Awesome work! Kyra🐴🐴
Kia ora. My name is chazei and I attend the hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. `i love the way you told us.next time you could tell us more.ka rawe!chazei.
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Kejon and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI really liked How you added detail When I went riding on a horse on my sister's birthday. This reminds me of when I went on a horse on my sister's birthday. Next time could you let me see all of your poem?Ka pai ! Kejon.`
Hi Amber,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Iraia and I go to Te Hapara School. I really like the way you told me what the horses names were. Next time you could make the page a bit smaller so I can read it better. Great Job.
Hi my name is kylah and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. i like the way you us about horse riding love the detail see you at kapa haka
ReplyDeleteHi Amber its Armaani from piwakawaka and you must had a good holiday
ReplyDeletehi my name is Tevita and i attend te hapara school I really liked how you wrote your story and I like how you done your background next time you should add some more colours good job
ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Cindy and I attend Te Hapara school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the colour that you do for your background.This reminds me of the sea .Next time you could add more detail.Ka rawe! Cindy